Character designs and first pass at animatic

The animatic can be viewed here.

I will tell you right now; those first five seconds are gone, everything after those five seconds will now take ten seconds.
Also, that needly tatoo thing will be giant in the next version. Why didn't I draw it giant in this version? OF COURSE IT NEEDS TO BE GIANT!!

Here are some character sketches with useful notes (Click to see both characters):


I don't care if characters completely change proportions from shot to shot BUT SO HELP ME GOD if you forget their muffin tops.